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That's the truth; it's also a run-on sentence.gavinmac wrote:No. Bar One used to do them, he passed away.
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Run on sentence! He just missed out the word 'and' or could have used a semi colon instead of the conjunction 'and'. One the other hand, he could have used a semi colon plus the conjunction/adverb 'however' then a comma followed by his next independent clause.giblet wrote:Comma splice!keeping_it_riel wrote:That's the truth; it's also a run-on sentence.gavinmac wrote:No. Bar One used to do them, he passed away.
A run-on sentence is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses (i.e., complete sentences) are joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction.
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Where is the god of tits and wine?
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giblet wrote:It's a run-on sentence and a comma splice!
When two independent clauses are connected by only a comma, they constitute a run-on sentence that is called a comma-splice.
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It is.giblet wrote:It's a run-on sentence and a comma splice!
When two independent clauses are connected by only a comma, they constitute a run-on sentence that is called a comma-splice.
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